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質問 1：
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Making a Budget
(A)
A. change includes to including
B. Making a budget is very easy if you no the basic procedure and a few principles.B.First, writing down all your income for one month.C.Income, including your paycheck or other checks from Social Security and the government, means all the money you receive.D.Next, figure out all your regular monthly expenses.E.Rent and utilities are important regular expenses; you should also include expenses for food and medicine you take regularly.(6) You must not forget because they add up, the smaller monthly bills such as payments for credit cards, interest on loans, and insurance.
(B)
(7)
You also should keep track of minor daily expenses because you probably spend more on them than you realize.(8) These includes purchases of such things as sodas, snacks, newspapers, magazines, and candy.(9) Add them up for a week and then multiply the weekly total by the number of weeks in the month to determine the total monthly cost.(10) Transportation costs, such as bus and subway fairs along with gasoline and tolls, should
also be calculated as monthly expenses.
(C)
(11)
Finally, it's important to plan as much as possible for special expenses, such as visits to doctors and dentists and repairs to your home or car.(12) Gifts for such events as Christmas and birthdays are other kinds of expenses you can plan for certain months.(13) Other activities, such as celebrating a holiday or taking a vacation, often demand extra spending, too.(14) Some months may also require you according to the season to buy new clothes.(15) By preparing abudget in all these areas, you can figure out how much money you need for each month, this will help you watch your spending and may help you to save for the future. -- Exhibit -Sentence 8:These includes purchases of such things as sodas, snacks, newspapers, magazines, and candy. Which correction should be made to sentence 8?
C. change includes to include
D. insert a comma after things
E. replace These includes with Including
F. insert a comma after includes
正解：E
質問 2：
-- Exhibit -
Making a Budget
(A)
A. month, moreover, this will help
B. Making a budget is very easy if you no the basic procedure and a few principles.B.First, writing down all your income for one month.C.Income, including your paycheck or other checks from Social Security and the government, means all the money you receive.D.Next, figure out all your regular monthly expenses.E.Rent and utilities are important regularexpenses; you should also include expenses for food and medicine you take regularly.(6) You must not forget because they add up, the smaller monthly bills such as payments for credit cards, interest on loans, and insurance.
(B)
(7)
You also should keep track of minor daily expenses because you probably spend more
on them than you realize.(8) These includes purchases of such things as sodas, snacks, newspapers, magazines, and candy.(9) Add them up for a week and then multiply the weekly total by the number of weeks in the month to determine the total monthly cost.(10) Transportation costs, such as bus and subway fairs along with gasoline and tolls, should also be calculated as monthly expenses.
(C)
(11)
Finally, it's important to plan as much as possible for special expenses, such as visits to doctors and dentists and repairs to your home or car.(12) Gifts for such events as Christmas and birthdays are other kinds of expenses you can plan for certain months.(13) Other activities, such as celebrating a holiday or taking a vacation, often demand extra spending, too.(14) Some months may also require you according to the season to buy new clothes.(15) By preparing a budget in all these areas, you can figure out how much money you need for each month, this will help you watch your spending and may help you to save for the future. -- Exhibit -Sentence 1By preparing a budget in all these areas, you can figure out how much money you need for each month, this will help you watch your spending and may help you to save for the future. Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.
C. month.By helping
D. month, helping
E. month.This will help
F. month, this will help
正解：C
質問 3：
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Sentence Our shipping policy guaranteeing that your trees will reach you in the best
possible condition.
Which correction should be made to sentence 5?
A. change guaranteeing to guarantees
B. change will reach to are reaching
C. change guaranteeing to to guarantee
D. insert a comma after you
E. replace your with one's
正解：A
質問 4：
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Sentence 1When I tried contacting your branch office in Tucson, we got a message telling me that the number was out of service.
Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.
A. Tucson.We got
B. Tucson we were giving
C. Tucson we got
D. Tucson, I got
E. Tucson, we got
正解：D
質問 5：
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Which correction should be made to paragraph D?
A. move sentence 14 to the end of paragraph D
B. move sentence 13 to the end of paragraph D
C. remove sentence 17
D. remove sentence 16
E. move sentence 15 to the end of paragraph D
正解：D
質問 6：
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Sentence 1We would be honored by you're presence.
Which correction should be made to sentence 14?
A. insert a comma after honored
B. replace presence with presents
C. change We to They
D. replace you're with your
E. change be to have been
正解：D
質問 7：
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Sentence 10:The task of the Everest cleanup is a huge one that require the cooperation of all involved.
Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.
A. one in that requires
B. one that require
C. one that requires
D. one, that require
E. one.That require
正解：C
質問 8：
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Sentence 7:Thus, to ensure that everyone is given an equal opportunity for a quiet working area, you are requested to observe this new policy.
Which correction should be made to sentence 7?
A. remove the comma after Thus
B. insert a comma after ensure
C. change are to is
D. no correction is necessary
E. remove the comma after area
正解：D
-- Exhibit -
Making a Budget
(A)
A. change includes to including
B. Making a budget is very easy if you no the basic procedure and a few principles.B.First, writing down all your income for one month.C.Income, including your paycheck or other checks from Social Security and the government, means all the money you receive.D.Next, figure out all your regular monthly expenses.E.Rent and utilities are important regular expenses; you should also include expenses for food and medicine you take regularly.(6) You must not forget because they add up, the smaller monthly bills such as payments for credit cards, interest on loans, and insurance.
(B)
(7)
You also should keep track of minor daily expenses because you probably spend more on them than you realize.(8) These includes purchases of such things as sodas, snacks, newspapers, magazines, and candy.(9) Add them up for a week and then multiply the weekly total by the number of weeks in the month to determine the total monthly cost.(10) Transportation costs, such as bus and subway fairs along with gasoline and tolls, should
also be calculated as monthly expenses.
(C)
(11)
Finally, it's important to plan as much as possible for special expenses, such as visits to doctors and dentists and repairs to your home or car.(12) Gifts for such events as Christmas and birthdays are other kinds of expenses you can plan for certain months.(13) Other activities, such as celebrating a holiday or taking a vacation, often demand extra spending, too.(14) Some months may also require you according to the season to buy new clothes.(15) By preparing abudget in all these areas, you can figure out how much money you need for each month, this will help you watch your spending and may help you to save for the future. -- Exhibit -Sentence 8:These includes purchases of such things as sodas, snacks, newspapers, magazines, and candy. Which correction should be made to sentence 8?
C. change includes to include
D. insert a comma after things
E. replace These includes with Including
F. insert a comma after includes
正解：E
質問 2：
-- Exhibit -
Making a Budget
(A)
A. month, moreover, this will help
B. Making a budget is very easy if you no the basic procedure and a few principles.B.First, writing down all your income for one month.C.Income, including your paycheck or other checks from Social Security and the government, means all the money you receive.D.Next, figure out all your regular monthly expenses.E.Rent and utilities are important regularexpenses; you should also include expenses for food and medicine you take regularly.(6) You must not forget because they add up, the smaller monthly bills such as payments for credit cards, interest on loans, and insurance.
(B)
(7)
You also should keep track of minor daily expenses because you probably spend more
on them than you realize.(8) These includes purchases of such things as sodas, snacks, newspapers, magazines, and candy.(9) Add them up for a week and then multiply the weekly total by the number of weeks in the month to determine the total monthly cost.(10) Transportation costs, such as bus and subway fairs along with gasoline and tolls, should also be calculated as monthly expenses.
(C)
(11)
Finally, it's important to plan as much as possible for special expenses, such as visits to doctors and dentists and repairs to your home or car.(12) Gifts for such events as Christmas and birthdays are other kinds of expenses you can plan for certain months.(13) Other activities, such as celebrating a holiday or taking a vacation, often demand extra spending, too.(14) Some months may also require you according to the season to buy new clothes.(15) By preparing a budget in all these areas, you can figure out how much money you need for each month, this will help you watch your spending and may help you to save for the future. -- Exhibit -Sentence 1By preparing a budget in all these areas, you can figure out how much money you need for each month, this will help you watch your spending and may help you to save for the future. Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.
C. month.By helping
D. month, helping
E. month.This will help
F. month, this will help
正解：C
質問 3：
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Sentence Our shipping policy guaranteeing that your trees will reach you in the best
possible condition.
Which correction should be made to sentence 5?
A. change guaranteeing to guarantees
B. change will reach to are reaching
C. change guaranteeing to to guarantee
D. insert a comma after you
E. replace your with one's
正解：A
質問 4：
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Sentence 1When I tried contacting your branch office in Tucson, we got a message telling me that the number was out of service.
Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.
A. Tucson.We got
B. Tucson we were giving
C. Tucson we got
D. Tucson, I got
E. Tucson, we got
正解：D
質問 5：
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Which correction should be made to paragraph D?
A. move sentence 14 to the end of paragraph D
B. move sentence 13 to the end of paragraph D
C. remove sentence 17
D. remove sentence 16
E. move sentence 15 to the end of paragraph D
正解：D
質問 6：
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Sentence 1We would be honored by you're presence.
Which correction should be made to sentence 14?
A. insert a comma after honored
B. replace presence with presents
C. change We to They
D. replace you're with your
E. change be to have been
正解：D
質問 7：
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Sentence 10:The task of the Everest cleanup is a huge one that require the cooperation of all involved.
Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.
A. one in that requires
B. one that require
C. one that requires
D. one, that require
E. one.That require
正解：C
質問 8：
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Sentence 7:Thus, to ensure that everyone is given an equal opportunity for a quiet working area, you are requested to observe this new policy.
Which correction should be made to sentence 7?
A. remove the comma after Thus
B. insert a comma after ensure
C. change are to is
D. no correction is necessary
E. remove the comma after area
正解：D
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